Sunday, 9 September 2012

Journal Writing

During this unit we have spent time learning about journal writing. Part of the summative assessment for this unit is to write a journal as an immigrant. Here are some samples from the students draft writing that they have been working on.

On the plane I was feeling very tired and I slept very deeply. When I woke up it was time to eat the airplane food which was chicken soup. It was very delicious. I had only just finished eating and we were in Korea. I couldn't believe it. I was very nervous.
Clara.

When my father said that we were going to Korea my sister and I couldn't believe it because it seemed so unreal.
Hidemasa.

In this new country I will be a doctor and cure my mothers illness and I want to be the person who endeavors which is like my father.
Eugene.

Being an ordinary girl that lives in Seoul was a perfectly normal life until..... now!!!
Ashley

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